A Journey Into Inner Space Via Meditation

A journey into inner space, via Meditation . In a relaxed state, of beauty, meditative reverie, visions of you, upon crystal petals, came to me. In this beautiful dance, across space – Meditation - with you, I love to do, what fascination, a subconscious projection, a visualization. You in dance, upon crystal, lotus blossoms, towards me, a translucent, crystal figure of pure light, for me to see. You take me into your tender arms, connect. We slip into each other, become as one, perfect in every way, the dance begins and I know, with every move, rainbow colours will flow through us two, as one, from you, it begins to show with every swirl, with every twirl, as all doth unfurl and I, to you, am everything I would love to be, this you would see, let yourself truly be, and with me, take wing, soar high above, with me, fly free. Free !, as we hope for the Red Tailed hawk we found. Broken, injured, floundering upon the ground. May she heal, her wing, her leg, become sound. B. J. “A ” 2 April 21st, 2014

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/21/2014 8:56:00 PM

That was gentle. very gentle as you swayed through the poem. it seemed as it i was being hypnotized. well done ;)

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 4/21/2014 9:32:00 PM

“ That was gentle. very gentle ” How sweet of you to say so Casarah Nance. Thank you for the lovely comments. “. well done ;) ”, “ as it i was being hypnotized. ”, and that may have been my state of mind at the time. I took time out, which I seldom do, from all that am doing to read some of your nice poems and discovered that – like me – you prefer, or like to rhyme. I would hazard a guess that your daughter has afforded you time to now write > All the Best !!! B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )