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A Jonquil of a Different Color

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I consider the picture on the right to a Narcissus..They have a wonderful scent..I have allergy and can't tolerate them inside but enjoy them in the yard..Narcissus starved from looking at his own reflection and from where he lay sprang up the Narcissus Flower..
N__Native of Europe, North Africa, Asia A__Amaryllis is its family name R__Rich is this plant in scent like fantasia C__Common name in English, Daffodil; your fame I__ In history, Narcissus died from starvation S__Sitting close to water fasinated by his own reflection. S__Sitting close to White Jonquil soaking in its beauty U__ Under a full moon now with my love's affection S__Soaking in Narcissus' scent, my great birthday! Sponsor: Tracie~*~Indigo Dreamweaver Contest: ~Flowers or Stones~ When coping from my notes, I left out a line..Thanks Robert for pointing out my mistake.. Sorry Tracie for the corrections.

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Date: 1/21/2012 9:25:00 PM
congrats Sara on a stupendous win for this unique entry so descriptive luv..
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:29:00 AM
cheers to you for a sweeping win, dear sara..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/19/2012 9:41:00 PM
Big congratulations, Sara, nice to see this one again as a winner!!
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Date: 1/19/2012 5:54:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this lovely tribute to the daffodil :-)
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara. You do justice to the Daffodil.
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 6:50:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. I've been reading others and I really like how yours stands out differently, yet beautifully. Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 1/17/2012 4:18:00 PM
Now this looks like a very descriptive acrostic about the famous flower. Good job, Sara.
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Date: 1/17/2012 1:15:00 PM
it's one of those flowers that let you know that God is real
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:57:00 AM
I too have a love of plants and nature Sara, so enjoy your nature related poetry greatly.
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Date: 1/17/2012 7:15:00 AM
soaked in fine, lyrical melody,sara... this truly blossoms.. winning huggs!
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Date: 1/16/2012 10:06:00 PM
lol.... i love the many colors... a wonderful a blooming poem. Good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:36:00 PM
what a great little lesson on the daffodil, SAra. NICELy done.
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:55:00 PM
Sara, I have just sent you soup mail concerning this write.
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