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life support you see right through ~ you cannot grasp my essence

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2018 6:57:00 PM

I was just noticing how you put the spaces between the letters of Air. That was genius, Sneha!

Franco Gonza

Date: 1/5/2018 10:26:00 PM

A breath of congrats to you!

Joseph May

Date: 1/5/2018 2:39:00 PM

Very nicely expressed Sneha

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2018 10:37:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Sneha - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/3/2018 10:53:00 AM

very cryptic and well done.. congrats, sneha!..huggs

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2018 12:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Sneha, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 9:48:00 AM

Lovely monoku. Congrats, Sneha.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/1/2018 11:35:00 PM

Congratulations, Sneha on your fine win.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/1/2018 8:13:00 PM

A thought provoking monoku Sneha. Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 1/1/2018 5:10:00 PM

A lovely, meaningful monoku, Sneha. I cannot grasp the essence, but I can appreciate it! Congratulations on this merited win. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2018 3:46:00 PM

This is so cleverly stated, Sneha. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2018 12:48:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Sneha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 12:19:00 PM

Great one liner Sneha...Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/1/2018 8:21:00 AM

So true...I can hear you in the wind, see you in the breath of your breathing, and feel you refreshing my mind when you're blowing but grasp you never... Nice peom...All the best

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2017 9:44:00 PM

An intriguing and amazing monoku Sneha. Superbly expressed. Best wishes for a win.. Happy New Year! ~Susan