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A Hush

There was a hush over the land not even a blade of grass stirred. The sun beamed down in delight and flowers opened their petals. The lake sparkled and shone its waves lapping the shore. The odd fish leapt up at flies then swiftly sunk back down. The forest trees seemed to part leaving a faint winding path. Then into the shady clearing she daintily stepped out. As she appeared a ripple, a ripple of excitement. Gleaming coat of silver as the sun highted her. She stood there poised as her ears flicked listening. A sculpture of beauty with rippling muscles. It was that most elusive creature with a spiral horn in her head. That gracefully walked to drink when done she faded into shadow Once more the forest came alive on the ground a silver hair giving proof to the legend that indeed Unicorns still live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/19/2014 2:40:00 AM
Love the images in this gem Shadow ;) enjoyed it this morning xx
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:09:00 AM
excellent pen linda dear pal
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Date: 12/15/2014 3:25:00 PM
It's cool that you have been to Tangier. So you know well about the poverty there. Let me see this poem you have written now!!
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Date: 12/15/2014 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful work..Enjoyed reading it this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2014 5:45:00 PM
ty Sara hugs
Date: 12/15/2014 6:02:00 AM
You know who loves unicorns don't you? PD does! She would love this poem! But you know who else loves this poem? ME!! This is such a spectacular write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece you have written here Shadow! I truly enjoyed it! Great Work!!
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Date: 12/15/2014 6:14:00 AM
Hi dearest Russell you must have been reading this as I read your poem lol. Yes PD does love Unicorns as do I. Hoping you will be posting some more of your excellent poems in the near future hugs
Date: 12/14/2014 8:13:00 PM
Loved seeing a unicorn -- and loved your poem. Sweet and peaceful -- just what I needed.
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Date: 12/15/2014 5:34:00 AM
ty David hugs
Date: 12/14/2014 7:44:00 PM
A lovely scene you have painted with your words Shadow. Serene and beautiful!
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Date: 12/15/2014 5:34:00 AM
ty Connie hugs

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