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Dripping over with the magic sense, you With violet wings soar unnaturally low. I split with your cloud's grief my own adieus— And the words that can hold your barbed mind close, A place where there's dreams— I hope— to shed to.

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Date: 10/26/2023 1:26:00 PM
an exquisite creation, Paige. The words and imagery. I loved 'split with your cloud's grief my adieus. Powerful words there. Thanks for visiting my poems. I am now 'following' you and hope to read more of your poems. Have a lovely day, Sara
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Date: 10/26/2023 10:08:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Paige, with a freshness of expression - "violet wings," "barbed mind," "dripping over with the magic sense" - that highlights each line. Thank you for sharing this gem. Blessings.
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Date: 10/25/2023 10:55:00 AM
Nice rhymes and interesting words here...
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