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A Housewife Unmasked

By day she goes about the weary business of her dreary life: a housekeeper, bookkeeper, shopper, chef, chauffer for two active teens, and hostess of her husband’s dinner parties is she. In the middle of her day she naps, for in the night. . . when her work-obsessed spouse soundly slumbers and the kids at last are fast asleep, she goes into the darkness of the woods behind her house. The mask of this woman falls without a sound to the leaf strewn ground. She raises her face to the moon. In its light, the stripes of a tigress are revealed! Her legs feel strong and limber. That ferocious appetite for something that she stifles flees away as she runs. Among the pines and midst the sounds of the woodland’s crepuscular creatures she runs and runs and runs. She is running after something she cannot put a name to. She’s a good woman. She would never use a bar or night club as her jungle. Now - with her tigress face - swift, stealthy, and strong - but above all, not beholden to any body she is simply free to be. After an hour of running, the mask of the housewife is restored. Then she collapses, exhausted on her bed, where she dreams refreshing dreams - which are necessary - for tomorrow she begins again the weary business of her dreary life. 10/26/2014; Now used for Skat's A poem you are proud of #3 Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/10/2018 3:12:00 PM
If only this were possible. What a wonderful ride! You took my mind away for a minute :) Thanks Andy
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Date: 10/17/2016 7:38:00 PM
Ah, the unshackled life of an unmasked housewife. Fine piece of writing, Andrea. A Souper 7 for sure. You just write so so good. I really enjoyed the adventure of running in the woods w/you. But you are too fast for this old lion to keep up with. A lovely poem. Ty for sharing. Much love to you.
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Date: 5/23/2016 4:49:00 AM
Wow another amazing poem penned by none other!!!! You are poetry personified my friend! Congrats on another fine placement
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Date: 5/23/2016 12:33:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
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Date: 3/19/2015 6:32:00 AM
Your poem lived up wonderfully to its title, Andrea. Julia, xx
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Date: 12/2/2014 6:07:00 PM
Very nice. I imagined myself running with her. Enjoyed.
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Date: 11/17/2014 4:22:00 PM
The format is all engulfing and the subject matter emotionally exhausting. Another immaculate effort.
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:13:00 PM
I see so much struggle and frustration here! The structure is captivating.
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Date: 11/9/2014 7:25:00 AM
Captivating! Such imagery you reveal as the inner spirit releases the chains of life and soars.
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:16:00 PM
Ah yes we all have an animal spirit as well as a human one we are all after all interconnected! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:06:00 AM
Andrea, I love your captivating poem and how you imaged this woman's inner spirit. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 11/7/2014 11:57:00 PM
beautiful Andrea.. ! woman.. woman. :) kudos!
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Date: 11/7/2014 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. I like how you transformed this women so magically. Wonderful poem.
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Date: 11/7/2014 10:27:00 AM
Wow, I love this great write, Andrea! I think all women have a tigress inside wating to be revealed even if only to ourselves. Congrats on your win...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/7/2014 7:04:00 AM
Awesome write Andrea...I like the line about the jungle...Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/7/2014 12:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. This is a different sort of poem - unique. I enjoyed reading it. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 11/6/2014 2:51:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN ANDREA. THIS WAS ONE OF MY FAVORITES IN THIS CONTEST. why am I screaming?
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:44:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 3:26:00 PM
Your tiger woman seeks an outlet to her emotions; in the middle of her day she naps...at night she finally snaps. // paul
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Date: 11/1/2014 7:04:00 PM
I think the the Tigress is in your reflection Andrea. I wonder if your purr is as limber as your feline lunges. I love how you escapade into your nocturnal territory unabashedly releasing the wild ego. J.A.B.
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Date: 11/1/2014 7:06:00 PM
Neat structure too...an unorthodox Cat..J.A.B.
Date: 10/31/2014 6:08:00 PM
Very nice write Andrea...intriguing...
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Date: 10/31/2014 3:46:00 PM
Busy day of a house wife Andrea, enjoyed your write
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Date: 10/29/2014 6:35:00 PM
outstanding piece of writing andrea very beautifully drawn
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:56:00 PM
this is a fascinating write Andrea so inspirational ty for placing my poem hugs
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Date: 10/28/2014 2:35:00 PM
This whole section sums it all up nicely, "The mask of this woman falls without a sound to the leaf strewn ground. She raises her face to the moon. In its light, the stripes of a tigress are revealed!"
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