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A Hospital Stay

Bland, the colors of the fall inside the stone and pastel wall gentle beeps and colored wires the casters creak; the beds on tires. Leafless air and plastic light intrusions through a starless night mechanics of the flesh intend to find a way to winter's end. Outside, a bold October sky sweet breath of fall is passing by loosing brilliant leaves to dance their final resting left to chance. The deck's been dealt, the final card should fall with cheerful disreguard Yet, I find I'm ever vexed and endless, comtemplate what's next.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2013 9:30:00 PM
wayne, I sure hope you are ok now. I guess this was the beginning of the ordeal you briefly mentioned in your comment to me? Let me know how you are now!! Sure hope you are recovered. I know , though. A lot of things do not ever go away. I enjoyed your poem. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/11/2011 2:23:00 AM
Hope this hospital stay is short. You paint an insightful picture of it, and well.
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Date: 10/11/2011 1:12:00 AM
many thoughts tumbling, hospitals are sad and necessary.. insurance companies have sucked the humanity outa them... or tried to... and try to... and still... in the stillness are sweet souls who get illness sucks unmercifully unless tended. they got the touch, so do you and thanks muchly. Namaste~N
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