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A Horse In My Reading Room

A horse in my reading room at my study table from my very childhood days, galloping as if never to stop, perhaps the fastest and oldest horse of the world. Its shiny black skin reflects the sky. Its beauty is like that of a sleek poem rhyming down the page dancing merrily, or an arrow zooming past everything leaving a trail of invisible impression in the air to reach its target. The horse definitely has a target. My father knew it, as he sketched it for me. He used to say frequently, "Life is motion with a target". To him the horse was the symbol of life. Twelve years have passed since my father's death, the horse is still galloping.... perhaps it knows its target.... but I am still looking for mine.... **My late father had the God gifted ability to sketch and paint like an artist.A true story. © kashinath karmakar (15th June 2011) ============================== Placement : 6th (June 2011) Contest:A Horse Story Sponsor:Carol Brown

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Date: 12/22/2011 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Picture Frame~moment" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2011 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed it x
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Date: 6/28/2011 1:36:00 PM
Kashinath, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:51:00 PM
Congrrats on your fabulous win in this contest with this excellent piece from you Kashi... gautami
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:19:00 PM
I am glad to see this one here to congratulate today. It remains one of my favorites in the contest. It is very deep and meaningful. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:12:00 PM
He was an artist as are you with words, light & Love and congrad's
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Great story. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:34:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:40:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, kashinath
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your super six spot in the horse contest with this exciting entry ..beautifully penned.. excellently told luv..enjoy..
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:38:00 PM
simply brilliant Kash.. adventuresome story and wonderfully written .. I luv horses.. and a great footnote for your Father my friend.. good luck in the contest with this stunning piece luv..
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Date: 6/16/2011 12:37:00 PM
Lovely nostalgic write, Kash : )
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:35:00 AM
so alive in descriptions and images of a horse that " lives" through your eyes and your dad's, kashi... a creative shift worth a win! whoo! ;) huggs!
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Date: 6/16/2011 12:55:00 AM
What a very wonderful take on the topic of horses, Kashinath and how cool that your father used the horse as a symbol of life, really liked his philosophy too! My dad also can sketch really well, I envy that about him, haha!
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Date: 6/16/2011 12:24:00 AM
Yes Andrea this one is for Carol's contest.
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:12:00 PM
This is beautiful and how you related it to your dad and to your own life, Kash. Wow, one of your best. I am not sure maybe in other countries, but we spell it "galloping" WRITE on!!
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:12:00 PM
Is it for horse contest?
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:28:00 PM
Beautiful expressions of love and loss in this Gem... very good my friend...
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:17:00 AM
Many of us are still looking for our targets, Kash. This horse your father sketched for you has special meaning. Beautifully written. Best wishes in Carol's Horse Poem contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 4:07:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your true story this morn..I am glad that you had the great relationship with your father..That is what the world needs today..Thanks for stopping by my work about the Bilberry Kiss..Sara
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:45:00 AM
A wonderful, creative piece, with equally wonderful allegory and imagery! "Life is motion with a target" is a profound and poetic statement! Nicely written poem.
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:27:00 AM
A horse sketched by my late father.
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