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A Homecoming

I have spent many hours reflecting on my dad's last earthly days. How he stared silently at the room's far corner, in another place. At times, many visitors filled his crowded hospital room. But my father's eyes were transfixed, his face peacefully consumed. Though he could not speak, I questioned his mesmerizing vision. As I held his hand I knew the answer, God had made His decision. Angels had come for my dad as he quietly faded in that bed. His time of peace had come, but it was the moment I had dread. I wanted Dad to stay with me just one more minute, hour, day. But summer, his favorite season, had come, the time for me to find a way to let him go, Jesus was calling; so I kissed him goodbye through tears. As he took his final breath, a peaceful calm washed over my fears. I stared off into the distance, imagining beautiful angel wings of love, embracing my dad, then flying him to the eternal summer of Heaven above. * This is all true. I held my dad's hand and sang to him as he took his last breath. It may have been angels or my dear grandma coming to take him home. I only know that I felt comforted by my dad's peace. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, March 19, 2012 First place in Touched by an Angel contest (Gail Doyle) Eighth place in Emotional Poem Contest (PD)

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Date: 4/10/2012 5:29:00 PM
Congrats my friend on your well deserved win!! So encouragingly done...how bittersweet the water we must drink in this life...big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:59:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win, great words..David
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:08:00 AM
Rhonda, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
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Date: 4/1/2012 12:57:00 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Touched By An Angel" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2012 4:28:00 PM
Much love and sincerity here...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/31/2012 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda :) Beautiful write Love Jon
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:37:00 PM
Congratulatoins on your win. Poem about a lost father always carry a special meaning to me and you painted a great picture with your poem. Mike
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:32:00 PM
totally dreamy and inspiring.. congrats with huggs, rhonda!..:)
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:21:00 PM
Rhonda!...I hope putting this story to a poem brought you some comfort..The love you had for your father really shined thru each and every word...congrats on this amazing poem..It is wonderful that you could be with him during these final hours...as you know, many are not afforded this opportunity. Blessings. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/31/2012 11:59:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a grand first place win for a lovely entry and phenomenal photo too.. luv..
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Date: 3/31/2012 9:53:00 AM
A loving heart breaking experience you write of. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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