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'a Home Treasured'

Memories scuffle to be remembered I wish this journey did not have to be endeavored The pictures against the wall Each with its own story to scrawl I can still hear the laughter Something we never use to chase after It all came so naturally This place embraces everything that means family If we close the door today Our hearts might feel a wee bit grey Calling it home was a treasure Blessed was I beyond measure
Contest: A Change Of View 2nd Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/11/2011 3:38:00 PM
love that line"memories scuffle to be remembered" Wilma and many dont realize their blessings calling a place home. Nice poem. Thanks for your much appreciated comment, sweetie
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:15:00 AM
Enjoyed this write Wilma.. luv the line..this place embraces everything that means family.. my family is enjoying my young son being home from military for a few days with his wife and soon to be parents role come Thanksgiving.. lovely lines my friend..
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:40:00 PM
Lovely poem, Wilma - and I've just seen it was a winner - very well done : )
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Date: 3/17/2011 9:55:00 AM
Wilma, lovely poem, well done:))
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Date: 3/17/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in the "A Change of View" contest sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 6:08:00 AM
Simply lovely, dear wilma. Many congrat's on your second place win. Lainie
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:11:00 AM
So beautiful and so blessed. Many ongratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win with this great write!! Caryl
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Date: 3/16/2011 3:11:00 PM
Lovely writing and great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:26:00 PM
wow,I am so happy I finally saw this one.I had completely missed it somehow. I was sure I was keeping up on your poetry! It is a very well deserved win, Wilma. COngratulations.
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:19:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in Michael's contest my friend.. an awesome entry written so lovingly .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 2:10:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this one earlier, Wilma, but I am so pleased to see you ranking high in Michael's contest. Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt remembrance of your childhood home. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma
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Date: 3/16/2011 1:47:00 PM
COngrats my dear Wilma on your 2nd place win in my contest... Thank you for your support... love always Michael
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:14:00 AM
Both Joy and sadness captures beautifully, very well done, really enjoyed.
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Couplets about your home..It is good to have great memories about a place that we once lived...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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