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A Home

A home full of understanding and trust, Compose of children, a mother and a father, Who face trials bravely without breaking, Who will live and love each other forever. A father who support and discipline, A mother who takes care and be a light, Children follow and help their parents, A happy home where unity is present . Strong bond that no one can destroy, If have faith in God even evil can’t annoy, Each member has its own responsibilities, With smile on their lips to do their duties. A home may not perfect as what they say, As long as each member will find a way, To solve problems that come in their life everyday, It’s a great blessing they receive from our Almighty . May 25, 2013 For Leonora's "A Home" Contest 4th Place Winner

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Date: 7/5/2013 10:52:00 PM
this is really lovely. Can't believe I had passed it up in comments. It deserves to be read.
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Date: 6/23/2013 12:03:00 AM
Perfect...you have painted the dreams of all of us...beautiful poem..Bidhu
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Date: 5/29/2013 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations.. you captured true home..
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:57:00 PM
Maria congratulations on your win. Nicely done warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:51:00 PM
Lovely writing Maria. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:18:00 PM
- Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:01:00 PM
My big hearty congratulations my dearest friend ,Maria for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/25/2013 10:58:00 PM
Hi, my dearest friend, Maria! Just sneaking in.... hmmmmnnn... so like it! Thank you so much in advance! Have a blessed Sunday! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:02:00 AM
- Gorgeous ... a safe and loving home. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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