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A Hole Within

A hole is here within Destroyed a piece in me Hurt finds its lonely place Emptying my sensitive heart Destroyed a piece in me Displaying hate throughout Emptying my sensitive heart Locking the door permanently Displaying hate throughout Hurt finds its lonely place Locking the door permanently A hole is here within Russell Sivey Entrant into Francine Roberts' "4 forms, 4 themes" contest 1/12/2012 Theme: Lost Love

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Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/12/2012 7:56:00 PM
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ohh, this is such a tender take on love, and it has your usual short yet plump images, russell.. again, i am bewildered! .. winning huggs! :)
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Dana Smith
Date: 1/12/2012 7:27:00 PM
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mm seems like a winner here.. good luck in the contest!!!! truely loved this one..
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John Loving Iii
Date: 1/12/2012 5:51:00 PM
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my hole was healed.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/12/2012 4:45:00 PM
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Nice write which I'm sure Francine will like. Good going, Russell.
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Jack Horne
Date: 1/12/2012 2:47:00 PM
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Powerful and sad piece, my friend - I hope it's pure fiction. I must try this form!
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