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A Hole In Your Heart

Thunder rattles windowpanes as rain strikes against the glass. But the lightning soon fizzles, and the downpours quickly pass. You envy the storm's freedom, stuck in your web of despair. If it wasn't for paying rent, no one would know you were there. You feel like you've had enough, and you've felt like that for weeks. And as your dreams disappear, hot tears trickle down your cheeks. You watch old soap-operas as you shelter from the rain. And alone, left to yourself, there's no one to feel your pain. You sit in silent anguish, an actor without a part. And as loneliness pervades, it's like a hole in your heart. You dream of finding true love, feeling special and wanted. But you're doubtful that'll happen, which leaves you feeling daunted. (Quatrain) 1/18/2015

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Date: 12/2/2018 3:23:00 PM
A real good penning Emile, fine rhyme and flow too, excellent piece!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/2/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2018 1:07:00 PM
I love these lines : "You envy the storm’s freedom caught in your web of despair." and "You sit in silent anguish an actor without a part."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 6:41:00 PM
the western malaise captured completely my friend
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2015 10:20:00 AM
Once more I thank you Steven. Emile.
Date: 1/20/2015 4:16:00 PM
Wow. Profoundly sad, but well written.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/20/2015 5:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Mark, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
Date: 1/18/2015 11:22:00 AM
Very same, Emile but so well worded. You are very talented. Welcome to the Soup.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/18/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Eileen, for your warm words of welcome and praise. Emile.

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