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A Heavenly Night

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October- 20-2023

Any Theme- Five Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

With what magnificent delight I watch the world bathed in dim light. When I feel God's omnipresence, Touching the cord of my essence, Heavenly seems this moonlit night.

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Stephan McBride

Date: 11/8/2023 10:54:00 PM

Love it, to feel and embrace the presence of God

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2023 1:01:00 PM

- Heavenly written, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 10/23/2023 12:16:00 PM

Lovely write Valsa, Congrats on your win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2023 2:45:00 PM

I have seen several written in this form, Valsa, so I am figuring it must be a contest going on. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Creative work for sure. Thank you for your visit to my page. Sara K

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/20/2023 10:43:00 AM

Valsa, I am transported to your heavenly night with this beauty, it is so spiritual and awe inspiring~

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2023 7:27:00 AM

Such imagery does you credit. Lovely poem. Blessings

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/20/2023 5:34:00 AM

Those are some truly exquisite, beautiful, and soulful words, Dear Valsa. Your quintilla is interlaced with sublime rhymes. The vividness of your imagination and the intensity of your feelings are striking. Your faith is obvious and the poetic way in which you've conveyed it is inspirational. Good luck

Karen Jones

Date: 10/20/2023 1:00:00 AM

Beautiful and hopeful with lovely imagery. Wonderful for the contest. Good luck dear Valsa.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2023 12:04:00 AM

So beautiful and soulful your words woven here with such sublime rhymes in the form of quintilla! Absolutely love the imagery and the depth of your emotions, your faith evident in such a poetic manner. Sometimes i do too watch the world bathed in dim light, and be amazed by nature and all the creation of God. Something about moonlit nights are ethereal and heavenly yes, i love your wordplay and flow of words too. Very well expressed and delivered for the prompt. Goodluck for the contest.