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unrhymed tercets nine verses to symbolise cloud nine 
including the title ten steps to a perfect dream

The heart dances over a moon milky satin white smiles turn to sunshine rings all shades of crimson spills out tunes Embroidered golden harp whispers inside lace waves kissing warmly caress waltzing within a butterfly's crowning Before the eyes colours of heaven catches the breath, breathless sigh holding you an angel to my soul

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Date: 11/29/2016 12:49:00 PM
I must admit the title eludes me just a bit but not the beauty in the verse...
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Date: 11/24/2016 1:46:00 AM
lovely imagery and words
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Date: 11/20/2016 9:49:00 PM
I lOvE LoVe everything about this piece! It's like drooling over something sweet that you can't have. Lol! Everything in one. BEAUTIFUL (^_*)
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:11:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful poem. Very nice. :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 5:19:00 PM
"milky satin white" I love it. so perfect, so well crafted! Thank you for sharing <3 Juli-Michelle.
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Date: 11/17/2016 5:18:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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