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A Heart Stop Away

tiny lass who graced this world joyfully brightening her grandmother’s life less than 12 short years smile so angelic, it could crown a Christmas tree never seeking sympathy Joycie’s zest for life drew admiration leaving her gracious memory in her family’s hearts much we can learn from Joycie who never succumbed to self-pity each day, a celebration of life albeit far too brief her smile still shines in heaven glowing beacon in the night sky her grandmother finds comfort seeing Joycie’s face -- a glowing star
Dedicated to Joyce Johnson and based on her poem “Joycie”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/27/2014 5:20:00 AM
you write so beautiful
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Date: 2/10/2014 10:23:00 AM
Way to go with this awesome winner..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2014 7:48:00 AM
A sweet dedication, congratulations.
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Date: 2/10/2014 4:24:00 AM
San and beautiful Carolyn . congratulations xx
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Date: 2/9/2014 11:30:00 PM
A sad one! Big congrats on your fine win in the contest!!
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:36:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win
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Date: 2/4/2014 3:15:00 PM
nice
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Date: 2/4/2014 2:37:00 AM
One of the best poems ever...and the love of a grandchild is in a place of its own...thank you for sharing
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Date: 2/1/2014 3:07:00 PM
It has been awhile since I have seen any of your material that exemplifies poetic quality. Once again, quite impressive.
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Date: 2/1/2014 10:34:00 AM
I love that your Joycie poem is here on your pages. Thanks for writing it Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2014 9:47:00 AM
Dear Carolyn - So touching, so comforting, so sad. love, Kathy
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Date: 1/28/2014 9:28:00 AM
Nobody told me you were back. This is for the contest I'm sure. Now I have an ideal the poem I want. Though I couldn't do one as sad as this. My heart would break.
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Date: 1/24/2014 3:28:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:16:00 AM
Wonderful that you have honored Joycie in this work..It is sad for a child to have such a short time upon earth but she is with Jesus in heaven awaiting all those that loved her and all those who were touched by her life..I know that heaven rejoiced when she came in the gates..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:58:00 PM
I can see your skill in poetry has improved over the years my friend, I didn't think that was possible as you were such a highly skilled poet already! This is a fabulously wonderful write my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! You have brought inspiration to many with this skillful piece! Great Work!!
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