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A Healthy Kenyan Ego Poem

A huge ego breaks off love’s embrace, A tiny ego slips off love’s embrace, No ego, no embrace of love! A selfless ego suffocates from love’s embrace, A selfish ego wards off love’s embrace, No ego, no embrace of love! A super-visual ego overshadows love’s embrace, A deep-seated ego is colonized by love’s embrace, No ego, no embrace of love! A healthy ego humbly looks above, A healthy ego can lead and also serve... Its nerves know not pressured blood, But developing it is almost hard!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/11/2018 2:32:00 PM
I absolutely love your work.It is amazing.
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:09:00 PM
Kenyan Poets Lounge for Poetry and poems in Kenya, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:10:00 PM
Kenyan Poets,, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:59:00 PM
I love this healthy ego message. Please keep penning some more. Peace, love and unity:-)
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:42:00 AM
With all the truth that flows in the poem, I like it.
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:56:00 PM
Welcome to Soup! If you need any help please don't hesitate to ask...Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2013 11:45:00 AM
i always thought ego is definitely negative, guess i have to change my mind, i love it! -Lucas-
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Date: 12/24/2012 1:12:00 AM
Beautifully written! I love how you've described the various egos and their effect on love's embrace. Very nice!
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Milton Manyass
Date: 11/26/2013 3:51:00 AM
certainly, ego, especially a bloated ego, is the bane of love and laughter...a good piece of work.
Date: 12/22/2012 9:49:00 AM
I know people who have egos and they're not the easiest people to talk to or to be around. I like guys and females who are down to earth. Loved your poem!
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Date: 12/20/2012 10:29:00 AM
A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Kenyan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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