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A Halloween Tale

If you’re in the mood for a tale Please come sit with me a spell I’ll spin a yarn of sheer delight Concerning October’s final night Children dress up in their suits Parents thinking, “Oh so cute” Cauldron stirred by a giant spoon Evil laughter echoes from the room Goblins called to do their deed As Vampires prepare to feed I remember once when I was a boy My excited heart raced with joy My friends and I took to the streets Filling bags with precious treats All night long running around Till we hit every house in town One final house on Graveyard Hill Suddenly the night was frozen still As we headed up the crooked path We heard the evil witches laugh Too scared to run too scared to stay Too scared to think too scared to pray The Iron Gate slammed with a clatter Suddenly everything was the matter Lightening crackled in the sky As across the moon an owl did fly A silhouette made not a sound As a fog started to cover the ground I thought of what my sister had said “Graveyard Hill is where they keep the dead” The silhouette stepped through the door Said, “Greedy children want some more” Suddenly monsters came out of the brush As our screams echoed in the midnight hush Those monsters eyes danced with delight As they delivered us to the witch that night As we all prepared to meet our ends It was just my sister and her friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/8/2009 1:04:00 AM
I could see the whole thing. I am still laughing. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carol's contest, Michael. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/2/2009 2:00:00 PM
You are on quite a roll in these contests--a tribute to your talent. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Michael. I enjoyed reading this one again!! Great job!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/2/2009 11:34:00 AM
Michael, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 12:47:00 PM
Michael, Thank you for entering my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2008 7:44:00 AM
I love this - am a big fan of horror and Halloween! wonderful story as I am sure we all have of Halloween past..
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Date: 10/23/2008 6:00:00 AM
WOW! Thats really good! The sense of suspense and conclusion definitely threw me for a loop. ^_^
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Date: 10/20/2008 1:01:00 PM
Wickedly funny! I'm still chuckling over the last line! Great job! Lonnie
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Date: 10/19/2008 11:50:00 AM
Great write.....you've inspired me to write something ghoulish for halloween as well!!
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Date: 10/18/2008 10:32:00 AM
a very very well written tale with wonderful imagery with a surprising end to which delighted me and brought back similar memories of the past,,blessings,,,and Thank You for reading and commenting on my poem...Cecil
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:58:00 AM
a very nice couplet :P i've been trying to learn that style :P
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Date: 10/13/2008 4:15:00 PM
Hello... I like this poem .. brings back some halloween memories.. thanks for your comments on my poem.. soft like mittens... constance
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Date: 10/12/2008 3:21:00 PM
Yes! This is right in the spirit. Things haven't changed much where I live. They come in bus loads. Enjoyed. Yep, Zeus was the big cheese on Olympus, Jupiter in the Roman. I wrote a chap book called Sibyl some years ago, and am inflicting it on anyone with which it communicates. Thanks for reading. Love, daver
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Date: 10/12/2008 12:58:00 PM
cute poem...takes me back to another time ....thanks for sharing I will be looking for the poem you had mentioned
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Date: 10/12/2008 6:43:00 AM
hehehe! Scary stuff michael! Full of memories and childlike delights for a hallows eve. Brgds. george
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Date: 10/12/2008 5:06:00 AM
Great story ! Nicel work Michael. Regards and thank you. Constantinos
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Date: 10/12/2008 4:37:00 AM
HA! Right on! Halloween is a very very close second with me (behind Christmas) as i just LOVE everything about it! We just decorated lastnight, and I am so happy! Woohoo! Great poem, Mike, love Kristin
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Date: 10/11/2008 10:06:00 PM
My Dad did that one year and was beat over the head numerous times with a treat bag that he insists had more apples in it than candy! Thank you for the memories and smiles! ~Tru~
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Date: 10/11/2008 3:51:00 PM
She certainly pulled a fast one on you! This is really funny. Hey, I would not have waited around to find out the real story. There would have been a clear path of fire and smoke blazing down the hill. Well, I guest that would have spoiled the fun now, wouldn’t it? Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/11/2008 10:04:00 AM
LOL this reminded of me and brother and sisters hitting the town I was dressed up as aunt jaminea that lady on the syrup bottle took like a week to get the black shoe polish off tho lol great write and imagery mike see your sister got ya in the end lol thanks for sharing dear friend hugs
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Date: 10/11/2008 9:41:00 AM
I may be a grown up......but I've never "grown up"!! I still love Halloween, it's the best....dressing up and being scared! Your sister sounded like my big brother...always looking for ways to scare me! Cute poem, Michael!
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Date: 10/11/2008 7:05:00 AM
Ha ha! Excellent ending! I love Halloween, and your poem, along with a few others here, have so put me in the spirit of the holiday. This was awesome Michael. Just the lightness and high spirit of fun I needed. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/11/2008 6:55:00 AM
Superb atmosphere, great story and so very well written. Had to chuckle at the ending. A fine poem indeed. Love Heidie
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Date: 10/11/2008 6:22:00 AM
Michael this was so funny. I enjoyed every bit of it. Excellent write, I dedicated one of my latest poems to you and John and my parents. Michael this has to be one of if not the best halloween poem I have read and the ending was great. God bless you my brother and Toni and your precious family Michael
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