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A Hallowed Out Heart

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A Hallowed Out Heart

Turtles hide inside a shell
Oysters, clams and crabs as well
When their existence is no more
A hallow shells lies on the floor
Empty and decaying fast
Soon it will no longer last
Washed away from sandy shores
Lost forever more and more
Pieces of them everywhere
No one remembers they were there
Like my heart that was forgotten
When you did your manly "sluttin"
Pieces of me washed away
From your whirlwind of decay
Waves of heartache every night
Splashed a darkness in the light
That used to glow inside my eyes
Until they saw your "sick" surprise
Leaving me a hallowed out
Shell that you forgot about

Robin Davis

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:13:00 PM
    a nice lovely old win... SKAT

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:22:00 AM
    Great lyrical winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara ..I like the metaphoric language used..

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:27:00 AM
    Now this is a very good poem Robin, I just loved it. Congrats on your win.....Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:39:00 PM
    What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,robin