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A Haiku Sextet Premiere Contest Winner

Losing her, a dream, winter ravaged my soul and Now the snowman melts. Solitary bird, why sing you only of spring outside my window? I stole a flower from nature's bed,bottled it. Now it is dying. The crunch of brown leaves tells me nothing whatsoever about decay, death. It is November, but the air forgets that as it dances springtime. Winter is most real, fall most sad, summer holy, but spring is a dream.

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Date: 12/22/2021 6:16:00 PM
Once again, I discover the glow of your work! Your pen has power my friend. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:49:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/21/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 10/24/2020 11:22:00 AM
I love these kaiku, LJ. I can see why you won a first place on these, all connected in that haiku fashion. Congrats to you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/24/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I'm glad you like them!
Date: 10/24/2020 7:14:00 AM
Simply superb! Congrats! :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/24/2020 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, U.S., though your pen name is a puzzlement [I think I would call myself, the Clueless Seeker--since I'm never really sure how to search].
Date: 10/24/2020 6:06:00 AM
This is such a beautiful collection of poems. I love this. God bless you and Congrats on your win :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/24/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Regina, and may you go with God as well...
Date: 5/22/2020 3:24:00 PM
Lovely bouquet of dreamy haiku, LJ. Every season has a meaning integral to your string of haiku. Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/23/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Sam!
Date: 7/2/2019 3:29:00 AM
Congrats on your placement!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/2/2019 10:55:00 AM
thanks Brenda
Date: 7/1/2019 4:05:00 PM
L.J. I see this was also given a trophy! Congratulations on both your First place win and belated congrats on your wonderful trophy! Very deserving of both. The way you have worded these haiku is exquisitely brilliant! I am putting this into my faves. Simply outstanding! : ) xxoo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/2/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Connie--you're making me blush, girl!
Date: 6/25/2018 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Wonderful haiku's
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/26/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your kind words are much appreciated!
Date: 6/24/2018 8:13:00 PM
I guess we are at the holy season now then, I have enjoyed your winning poetry L.J. congrats.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/25/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/23/2018 8:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Very creative Haiku.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/24/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 6/23/2018 8:41:00 PM
A beautiful set of haiku, L.J. splendid in their thoughtful and meaningful imagery. Congratulations on your excellent and well deserved win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:37:00 PM
A most pleasant and harmonious trail of haiku. Congrats, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/24/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Line!
Date: 7/10/2014 11:47:00 AM
WOW, WOW>..Love it ...Linda
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Date: 7/2/2014 4:59:00 PM
Very good! I enjoyed these Len :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 11:36:00 PM
Len, a lovely seasonal array in haiku, Mohan
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Date: 7/1/2014 10:56:00 PM
Dear Len: Very nice these fragments. Enjoyed. Leon
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