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A Habit

I started to develop another habit. Neither was it good or bad. Then unexpectedly i grabbed it. I was feeling so selfish and glad. Neither was it good or bad. All I wanted was continuous pleasure. I was feeling so selfish and glad. Once I am invited with no measures. All I wanted was continuous pleasure. Stopping was not a reality you see. Once I am invited with no measures. I couldn’t just let this habit take control of me. Stopping was not a reality you see. This sensation felt so unassuming at times. I couldn’t just let this habit take control of me. It’s so pleasantly here and dreadfully Unkind. This sensation is so unassuming at times. Then unexpectedly i grabbed it. It’s so pleasantly here and dreadfully Unkind. I started to develop another habit. By Lonnell George

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Lonnell. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2010 6:15:00 AM
Thanx Lonell for reading my wotk ...Love weaving ... & leaving nice comments..... Luv/best wishes...... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:05:00 PM
Very nice! I enjoyed reading your work today.... Looking forward to reading more... Dana'lynn
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Date: 12/14/2010 12:32:00 AM
Many congrats Lonnell on winning coveted spot in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lonnell in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:00:00 AM
Oh, this is so true, is it not. You have written a poem which strikes all of us, I think. I especially like the fourth verse. Congratulations on your win in the pantoum contest.
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Date: 12/12/2010 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your 6th Place Win in the contest, Lonnell! Enjoy! Love, audrey
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Date: 12/12/2010 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:31:00 AM
Many of us have habit we wish we could shed, Lonnell. It's particularly scary when we think they are controlling our lives. But as you say, sometimes we break one habit only to assume another. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 7:21:00 AM
Congrats Ionnell on your winning poem in Paula's Pantoum contest with this wonderful write and win.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, lonnell
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:46:00 PM
Interesting work..To want nothing but pleasure is an easy habit to acqire and a shock to break..Good work..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2010 2:28:00 AM
excellent!
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