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A Growing Need

Like dawn in heat I am already slave to your loins our impending collision the meeting of body and mind immanent A gentle run of tongue shimmers parched rims, lost fingers are confused with buttons and holes Slowly fabrics are rent falling to retire in shreds letting shadow and light rest on the fusing of our skin The rod of your desire is arched to my wetness as buds tip your lips my mouth parts descending to my knees your shaft slides down my cheek discovering my mouth... and the guttural sound of sin A moving campaign of desire, mind bending waves traveled all the rooms with a view unbridled hands, roamed without thought of destiny The whole of your intent is rapaciously introduced to heaven overwhelmed and conquered I am now a lost continent awaiting your next expedition And suspended in a pure vacuum of ecstasy so exquisite it rests on my soul I am imprinted for all time ... through the window an icy breeze dimples my skin and I lay in amber light humming...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/27/2014 12:45:00 PM
Um, excuse me a moment would you dear? Gotta go take a cold shower followed by a blood pressure pill...Written in your own unmistakable and brilliant style...I now dub thee queen of erotica of the Soup - Tim
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Date: 6/19/2014 8:34:00 PM
You had me wondering which holes you were talking about, when fumbling for those buttons. Very saucy indeed.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:04:00 AM
lol you were meant to wonder about buttons and holes lol thanks glad you liked it ...love Jayne x
Date: 6/12/2014 8:37:00 PM
A poem as hot as HOT can be!!!!!! BBBravooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Robert, curtsey lol....love Jayne x
Date: 6/10/2014 9:45:00 AM
A journey of love and lust exposed to sensual pleasure that leads to suspended ecstasy. A strong expression of desire and release. excellent! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2014 1:02:00 PM
Ahhhh...but I can still see a purring Cheshire cat:)
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:02:00 AM
Ahhh Paul you can see the journey I was trying to take you all on, its not just about lust there is so much more here than just if you read into it, thanks for your comment its very appreciated...love Jayne xxx
Date: 6/9/2014 2:26:00 PM
Hot N Spicy!!! Excellent write indeed!
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Pace, it is hot and spicy huh ? lol ....love Jayne
Date: 6/9/2014 8:26:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful poem!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/20/2014 2:37:00 PM
I am glad you did, its still a work of art!!!
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Arthur I am glad you liked it I wasn't sure if I should post it or not it is a little racy lol love Jayne xxx

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