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A Grey Day Brightens

The day is grey, no sun peeks through But then again I heard from you A comment here a comment there In fact comments almost everywhere The sun is shining in my heart The greyness of the days depart You lighten up my cheerless day Can’t wait to see what’s new today © ~GG~24/10 2012

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Date: 10/24/2012 3:17:00 PM
and comments deserved, for these wonderful poems....
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Date: 10/24/2012 10:19:00 AM
i think we can all relate to this one. perfect rhyme and rhythm, too!
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