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A Grey Day Brightens

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A Grey Day Brightens

The day is grey, no sun peeks through
But then again I heard from you
A comment here a comment there
In fact comments almost everywhere

The sun is shining in my heart
The greyness of the days depart
You lighten up my cheerless day
Can’t wait to see what’s new today

© ~GG~24/10 2012

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:17:00 PM
    and comments deserved, for these wonderful poems....

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:16:00 PM
    N-joying summa your fine words today. Sorry to hear you been knocked down by the crud. Your smiling attitude has brightened my day many a time, so I say thanks and hope you're up spittin' fire real soon, John.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:19:00 AM
    i think we can all relate to this one. perfect rhyme and rhythm, too!