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A Green Isle

The dark green of her eyes matches An island far away That lush green isle known as Ireland A place to see one day There is an arched shrub lined pathway A gate there opens wide So lush and green the passage there It beckons come abide Through a gate there's a lighthouse white A beacon that flashes A light to guide through darkest night In the morn refreshes Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Contest: Irish Poems Written from viewing photographs taken of Ireland The form is a type of Poulter's Measure 8,6,8,6 _the six syllable lines rhyme

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Date: 2/14/2013 11:45:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, well deserved, Sara! Luv, Annalise
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:08:00 PM
Hello Sara, Congratulations, :-), with your awesome, Irish Poems ... xox~PD
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Date: 2/12/2013 8:02:00 PM
Ireland is a poet's paradise Sara and I do hope you get to visit one day. My last trip I drove over 900 miles around the isle with my aunt and we had so much fun getting lost! We found the factory where they make toy soldiers out of pewter and ship them all over the world, including England. It was out in the boonies and we were so happy we got lost and found it! I bought a chess set made out of pewter. It is one of my fondest memories of our trip. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:22:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Sara luv xx
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Date: 2/11/2013 8:13:00 PM
A lovely poem, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/11/2013 3:21:00 PM
Very beautiful Sara...congrats
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Date: 2/11/2013 1:54:00 PM
As though you have been there. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2013 12:05:00 PM
well written Sara,enjoyed...thanks for sharing and congrats...
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:19:00 AM
Green on green... Very nice. Good luck in the contest. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:08:00 AM
this poem has me wanting to see those pictures of Ireland,nicely written,thanks Sara for sharing
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Date: 2/7/2013 3:08:00 PM
i do hope that you get there one day. your poem captures its beauty very well, but it's just amazing in person...
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Date: 2/7/2013 11:20:00 AM
This is a beautiful and wonderful write my friend! I just loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! You have portrayed Ireland and green eyed women in a gorgeous light Sara, very awesome! What a lovely piece, Great Work!! PS wondrous Poulter's Measure!!
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Date: 2/7/2013 10:04:00 AM
Enjoyed this fresh green write Sara, nice to read your views on Eire.."
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Date: 2/7/2013 8:01:00 AM
hi dearest friend Sara..congratulation for the Contest...this is a very great write.. all the best <3 :) Sk
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Date: 2/7/2013 7:47:00 AM
This is wonderful...so much good luck sent your way from me.....four leaf clover too
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Date: 2/7/2013 7:10:00 AM
sounds very inviting :)
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