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A Graceless Sailor

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Written: January 1st 2024 ____________________________________ Inverted into berth back to the coast braced by a breeze with hurricane fury we cluster in the crevices stroll on shattered shards return to the abyssal realm at last able to sail free. The fog is currently lifting we're floating out to sea utters crow cries on its perch will assist us in steer astride of a mermaid out in turbulent seas calling me constantly once again at home. Wood composes my limb my body has aged ages oxidized the skin sailing by themselves carry me, carry me from water that freezes return to my family shielded from the ocean. Lay down my body cover me with satin lost their zenith with the azure, rolling sea perform each step again conjure me back to my bed once again, at home to at last find peace.

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Date: 2/3/2024 3:46:00 PM
The lament of many an old salt, I am sure. Your words capture the image of the seafaring gent so well SP. Yet another feather in your hat sir. I am a true admirer of your immense talent. Wen
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Date: 2/3/2024 3:47:00 AM
As always this is a poem that depicts wisdom within and life and journey through changes and more in the most philosophical manner! Your use of metaphors and poetic techniques such as alliterations and more truly stands out for me and i love your wordplay as always! Just impeccable! Especially loved the lines “ will assist us in steer astride of a mermaid out in turbulent seas calling me constantly once again at home.“ whoa! That stood out for me and is so beautiful how you phrase thoughts! BOL
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Date: 2/3/2024 3:36:00 AM
A deep quest about how why and where and when does the world revolve and what for and how do we humans fit in. Questions of depth out in the tutbulent sea, astride a mermaid constantly calling you to return to your family. so you can at last find peace at home, in your own bed. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/2/2024 11:47:00 AM
Hey big guy, your poem opens with imagery of being "inverted into berth," suggesting a turning point or transition. It describes a voyage back to the coast, symbolizing a return to familiar territory after facing life's storms and challenges. The journey becomes a metaphor for personal growth and transformation... It captures the universal themes of journey, aging, mortality, and the quest for inner peace. Through its imagery it invites readers to contemplate the complexities of human existence.
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Date: 2/2/2024 10:44:00 AM
Great emotive poem.
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Date: 2/2/2024 9:49:00 AM
Master Sotto, your poems are impressive, whether in free verse or in rhymes. I guess the return to home conceals a hidden meaning and refers to the divine home whence we come and we all have to return as we are temporary travellers sent on earth to purify our soul. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
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Date: 2/2/2024 8:18:00 AM
A multi textured atmospheric write. A pleasure to read my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2024 4:57:00 AM
carry me, carry me from water that freezes return to my family---very emotive state of mind so well described, my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2024 3:29:00 AM
I enjoyed this metaphorical adventure at sea...spoke perhaps of your own Odyssey and return 'home.' Given that, I especially liked "out in turbulent seas calling me constantly once again at home." An inspirational poem of hope, courage, renewal, and a return home to peace." If such is the case, I'm happy and delighted for you! your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 2/2/2024 3:22:00 AM
Beautiful. I love sea poems. May you always find the haven you search.
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Date: 2/2/2024 12:16:00 AM
Oh l absolutely love this sea-faring tale Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 2/1/2024 9:11:00 PM
Well written, my friend. A sea faring tale is always good poetry fodder. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Blessings to you of good health and peaceful sleep. Bill
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Date: 2/1/2024 5:44:00 PM
Ah, nostalgia described in the personified sea! The rhyme at the end was beautiful.
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