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A GOOD QUESTION

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A GOOD QUESTION

Step
         by
                 step
                 into
the chasm
                  of
                      life
we
sink
          as in
                  a dream
unable
            to
                   stop
to
awake
            after sleep
each
day
             renewed
we
         are
                  in the
same 
             place
                      yet
                      again
waiting
              to carry on
                 compelled
by
       our past
                    to tread
into
        yesterday's
footmarks
will
           today
                   be
the day
            we
               change





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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Great work..Will today be the day that we change?...Enjoyed reading this morn..Soup mail soon..Sara

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:54:00 AM
    Brian I love this and the format suits it...David soup mail

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:36:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!