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A Glimpse of the Ages

A cool breeze like the slightest graze of the recently passed flows under the shaded thickness of the ancient woods. The worn paths, sunken below the forest floor like water forgotten stream beds, slide naturally through this wooded sanctuary. Broken decaying trees rest upon the strong backs of the sun reaching ones, spreading their immense girth of leaves allowing the barest of rods of sunlight to illumin the undercarriage of this dense growth. Stillness presses on me, making me one and alone with this placid place. Ambering down the trail, knowing what every touch of movement and nuance of the environment means. In the distance all I see is trunks, like a never-ending collection of mirrors imposing their presence upon each other barely acknowledging my passing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/29/2008 7:14:00 AM
nice artistic pen
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Date: 10/28/2008 12:47:00 PM
This is so wonderful. Truly appreciating nature to the fullest. Felt like I was there. Wishing I was there. Amazing imagery and so much more. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:33:00 AM
Hi Mark Absolutely Beautiful! You've captured the spirit of the woods elequently! I feel renewed smile. I love the ending. Love Light Truth Patricia
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