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A Girls Night Out

On a girls night out, without any guys She dressed real sexy, showing off her thighs I couldn't stop looking, I must confess Admiring her form, enhanced by that dress Dancing with friends, she exuded comely grace If she was shy, she revealed not a trace Passionate moves, made my temperature rise Hers the embodiment, of bedroom eyes Gathering my courage, I took a chance Making my way over, I asked her to dance She said "So sorry, I'm here with my friends perhaps a coffee, when the evening ends." I gave her my number and walked away Wishing in that moment that I could stay When the girls night ended, our night began That sexy woman, made me feel like a man For Nadya's Romance in The Night Contest.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 10:00:00 AM

your welcome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:35:00 AM

NICE WIN...PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

James Fraser

Date: 6/8/2014 11:32:00 AM

Your poetry flowed like a great night out, nice one Richard, many congratulations, James :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 9:58:00 AM

Thanks James.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/4/2014 7:28:00 AM

GREAT POEM!!!! Congrats on the win my friend!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Robert.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2014 12:50:00 AM

Interesting write, congrats on the win, richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 9:55:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/3/2014 6:10:00 AM

You have a great imagination. What a way to crash a girl's night out. I saw this contest but I think he was looking for more than my version, which is to roast hot dogs and marshmallows, and share stories and laughter by a campfire. The only dressing up is when mosquitoes bite and the girls put on long sleeve shirts.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2014 7:43:00 AM

Your description sounds perfect. In reality I would much rather crash that party.