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A Girl

There is A Girl I Know That Always Made Me Feel Funny inside. Yes, I said, "Funny Inside." This Girl that I always wished that she Could Be By My Side. I Kissed this Girl Before. And thought, "She may as well pull the Trigger." Because it has been killing me To know That we will Never be Together. WE shared Many Memories and seen many butterflies as well as Bee's One thing we won't see is Us Growing old Together and Making Our Family Tree. How could A Girl Make me Feel such a way, for Years now as I watch her drift away? A Girl I will Never forget Because In my Heart She will Always have a place To Stay!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 1:23:00 AM
Malcolm, This is a sad story and it seems a shame there is no redemption for you both, life is short but when you are sad it seems an eternity even though the time is still the same, it is how your mind accepts it, you have to make life a win for you and put misery in it's place, maybe she will return, were there's life there's hope, hold on to this and you will be a winner, all the best. John
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Malcolm Brooks
Date: 6/10/2021 7:58:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments John - you are welcome back whenever you want!
Date: 7/23/2013 4:37:00 AM
Keepin' it practical a girl's supposed to make you feel that way, good... funny good.
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Date: 6/10/2021 7:57:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments Karl - you are welcome back whenever you want!
Date: 7/22/2013 4:34:00 PM
What a sweet but very sad poem my friend! I notice you are new here... WELCOME! Jack
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Date: 6/10/2021 7:57:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments Jack - you are welcome back whenever you want!
Date: 7/21/2013 8:52:00 AM
- Thank you for your beautiful poem, a wonderful girl! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Malcolm Brooks
Date: 7/22/2013 1:17:00 PM
Thank You, I Really Appreciate it :)

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