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A Gift to Give forgiveness divine God’s great gift of grace that’s mine from now for all time apologies due address errors past from you I accept as true God’s love lives in all And when mercy does befall sins are not recalled 8/17/16

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Kamal Al-Adil

Date: 4/17/2023 2:59:00 PM

Greatly Worded and Definitely gonna take heed

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2020 12:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Janis, with great imagery, rhyme and content in this beautiful Senryu. Hugs Eve

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/23/2016 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful message Janis.congratulations!

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/23/2016 5:52:00 PM

Thanks, Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/22/2016 8:15:00 AM

Congrats Janis to win top place. Best Wishes

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/22/2016 9:37:00 AM

Thanks for your congrats, Anisha.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/22/2016 2:09:00 AM

Congratulations. This is beautiful. Kai

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/22/2016 9:38:00 AM

Thanks, Kai. I appreciate your comment. Thanks also for stopping by.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win Janis! 7 ; )

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/22/2016 9:40:00 AM

Thanks, Connie.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 4:50:00 PM

Janis, this is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2016 11:04:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 1:59:00 PM

Janis , congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2016 11:06:00 PM

Thanks, Eve.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/21/2016 1:45:00 PM

Well written Janis, congratulations...

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2016 11:06:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.

James Inman

Date: 8/21/2016 12:03:00 PM

Janis, a wonderful sentiment and nice rhyme.

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2016 1:41:00 PM

Thanks, James

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2016 11:48:00 AM

Nice rhyming senryu, very hard to do, congrats on a worthy win!

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2016 1:42:00 PM

I appreciate it. Thanks.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2016 10:31:00 AM

Janis, Love this! You may not have known but I love rhyme sometimes within senryu! I know it doesn't have to rhyme, but I like it..beautiful lady...God lives in us all! congrats on your top win and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2016 1:44:00 PM

It was a beautiful thought for a contest. I jumped on it immediately because it was so inviting. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2016 9:53:00 PM

very well done for rhyming senryu, Janis! It seems poets are doing sets of three. I guess I should try for that too!

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/17/2016 11:31:00 PM

the contest sponsor requested three, like her model. Thanks for the uplifting comments.