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A Gift Fom Heaven

See the thick rain falling from the invisible clouds, lose yourself in its rhythmical and pelting sounds: open wide your palms: its a gift from Heaven... that gift you never asked since you were born! Hear it beating hard on your window as you sleep, hug a soft pillow and dream of a rainbow to come; by bright morning, each rose awakening will weep: pick any color you think it's beautiful and awesome! Lonely dreamer, drift on currents of scented breeze going past wild meadows and daffodils fields yellower than spring sunshine... while hills below greener than grass, wave like willows in a tempest; rain slowly tampers off, showing patches of blue : its finally sunrise!

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Date: 12/25/2015 9:39:00 PM
Andrew, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on writing this truly superb piece and on your win with this great poem!
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:53:00 AM
Andrew...this is really lovely. I see why it is a top winner! Congratulations my friend. Many blessings are wished for you this holiday and throughout the new year!
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:11:00 AM
Hi Andrew, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smile & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 1:43:00 AM
Superb poetry Andrew.. congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on 2nd place win with this excellent poem.
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your, Andrew!
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