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I hate it God I hate it that everything is based on You You said this and You said that We can't do anything based on our liking Why is everything based on You? We can't do this and we can't do that We can't say this and we can't say that And what You say - go We can't do whatever we want Why is that, God? Why do You have a say in everything? When do we have a voice of our own? Never, right? It's okay God as long as You know who is in charge Just kidding God Pow - I am a gonner If it wasn't for your grace I would be gone a long time ago Thank You Lord Okay

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Date: 6/24/2015 2:19:00 AM
You are a very passionate writer. God bless you.
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:20:00 AM
Good write, with out his Grace we all would be long gone, and with out his love and protection id of been gone 5 years ago really. How he moved mountains to keep us safe, God bless you
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:40:00 PM
Toquyen, What about those poor nine defenseless dead bodies? If you gat a chance, check out my poems about that. Re--PVT Lester Deschler Died July 12th, 1944 in tank explosion. Jim Horn
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 6/23/2015 9:48:00 PM
I got a poem for you about that!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things