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A Gift

The bright shiny yellow ball radiating light Fierce warrior of the morns sky Up above the trees beams pierce through night Magically turning it into day where birds can fly Sun's magic sky king who heats the earth Saves it from an icy death each warm day Some worship you, call you God, dance with mirth You're only one of God's creations that He let stay Thank you God for the sun though some days too hot Without it all would be lost_icy death Thank you God for all blessings_stars that sky dot Nature that you made for us_ bequeath Bright yellow sun magnificant beauty But paled by Jesus, God's Son's, His crowning glory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/12/2012 6:17:00 AM
the whole world is a gift from GOD,but the sun is the gift that keeps the other gifts warm,check my Mankind,great write Sara
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Date: 7/11/2012 4:44:00 PM
Lovely poem Sara... Don't get on to see everyone and read much but I'm writing...Give yourself a hug from me...Patrick
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Date: 7/11/2012 8:03:00 AM
I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Sara. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2012 8:02:00 AM
A warm and tender write, Sara. "God dance with mirth" is a beautiful image to share with the sun! Hope all's well with you and yours...love, Mikki
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Date: 7/10/2012 9:09:00 PM
Sara, your appeal to the senses is really striking.
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:20:00 PM
Very nice, Sara. YOu sure are getting into these sonnets !! I love sun poems.
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:31:00 PM
What a wondrous and delightful write you have written here Sara! I really enjoyed reading its grandiosity this afternoon! Your expressiveness is quite superior my friend! I just love your creative poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:11:00 AM
What a lovely happy poem, the sun should be revered, without it we would not be here, well done
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