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A Gentle Scream

This tender breeze picks up my thoughts... Up high over many skys with hopes of being caught... Left to only imagine if it passed over or fell to its death... Or maybe catch the eyes of a Poet I never met... Either way I will start my day the same... With anticipation and hope that my words will fly untamed... To maybe here whispers that they were seen... And to finally bring a smile through a gentle scream..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2012 12:04:00 AM

Michael, Congratulations, in Matt's wonderful contest. Have a great one, always & forever PD

Kash Poet

Date: 1/20/2012 12:51:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your win in Matt's contest.Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2012 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Matt's "Anything" contest Michael. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2012 8:56:00 PM

WOW, michael. Yes,I remember this one and how great to see it doing so well in that ANything goes contest.A great honor. Congrats.

Matt Caliri

Date: 1/19/2012 8:18:00 PM

Great title...congrats on 8th place in my "Anything" contest...99 entries on this whopper! good job!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/30/2011 11:05:00 PM

Hey Michael,, good one,, I really like how it flows a smile through a gentle scream ;} Happy New Year,, blessing to you and yours ;}

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/18/2011 8:18:00 AM

I somehow missed this one Mr. F (flirt) lol just teasing ;) you sure do bring many smiles with your words Michael.. love Wilma

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/8/2011 10:21:00 AM

Love this a lot! 'Or maybe catch the eyes of a poet I never met...' '...with anticipation and hope that my words fly untamed' My God, dear Michael... a gentle scream it is your poem here, as gentle as summer breeze yet send message bluntly as you were screaming.. :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/8/2011 9:07:00 AM

Your words sure give the reader a taste of the gentle smile you wear. Sweet verse that gives a poet something to muse on!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 9:19:00 PM

Great contrast with gentle scream, Michael. I enjoyed this read. One for all the poets here.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/7/2011 7:18:00 PM

I did smile without the scream in this soft lovely verse. Give me a sweet glimpse into your thoughts today!

James Peranteau

Date: 12/7/2011 6:45:00 PM

Oh, this write really takes the mind on a journey dear poet ! awesome write sir ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 7:18:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Michael. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Steven Cooke

Date: 12/7/2011 4:42:00 AM

excellent write and i love the last line. a write of quality me thinks.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2011 11:50:00 PM

Michael, i scream and smile... lol... ;-) you always find ways on entertaining both our eyes with your rhymes, and skills of fluttering words... enjoyed,..p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/6/2011 6:40:00 PM

A Fantastic write Michael! I love this line, "...Up high over many skys with hopes of being caught..." That line brought me a smile! Beautiful Work!!

Jacqueline Evans

Date: 12/6/2011 3:46:00 PM

i like it! :) love the words too