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A Gentle Lady who Looks Back

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A Gentle Lady who Looks Back

Leaning on the deluxe seat,
She munches banana chips.
Her handsome husband breathes near
And an air-cooler blows chill.
Yet, she looks back from the car.

The vehicles fly, scattering on road.
One bike chases so close,
As it tries to kiss the car.
His hand has locked her shoulder;
Often, they swing together in ditches.
Yet, she looks back from the car.

He made her shine in rare jewels.
The moments sway in chitchat.
Now, their car diverts
To some pleasure zenith.
Yet,it is unknown why she looks back.


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  1. Date: 11/18/2011 5:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 10:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:35:00 AM
    I enjoyed this very much too..soup mail

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 12:10:00 AM
    mysterious and intriguing write FABIYAS .. leaving conclusion to imagination.. perhaps another luv left behind.. I always think on luv u know..

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 10:55:00 PM
    this is so interesting and different, Fabiyas. IS it someone you saw from a car window yourself? WEll done.