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A Gem Over Waters

Blank, silent sight, fretted the gods, Nowhere in the horizon, a living thing abides; Handfuls of soil, they carry in the air, Poured as seeds ‘till a haven molds there. Land of the Morning, Pearl of the Orient, So called the Philippines, the name I am sent; Seated in the east where the sun is dawning Pride of the Pacific, as a lady ever shining. Unlimited riches stretch beyond sight, Vast oceans, boundless forests, plains are wide; Flora and fauna of diversified species, Plants, animals in a variety of faces. Wet and dry – the nation goes through; Brown and green – the Chocolate hills dress up too. Her angry volcanoes constitute the ring; and typhoons, the belt; A geographical fashion of calamity been made. What makes her stunning that colors adore such? Not her beauty, not Boracay, not that much… But her people, the Filipinos, the key, the answer Unlocking a treasure – a gem over waters.

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Date: 6/23/2016 10:29:00 PM
Ezekiel Escol, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ezekiel Escol
Date: 7/1/2016 10:19:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for stopping by and took a read of my craft. Please, I desire to hear from you your comments and criticisms. I also would want to learn from all of you here, any poetic skills and techniques. Cheers!
Date: 6/18/2016 5:09:00 AM
Anyway, that's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Ezekiel. :) Will take this as one of my favorites.
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Date: 6/18/2016 5:03:00 AM
I love not only this part "Land of the Morning, Pearl of the Orient, So called the Philippines, the name I am sent; Seated in the east where the sun is dawning Pride of the Pacific, as a lady ever shining." but the entire writing itself. ;)
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Ezekiel Escol
Date: 7/1/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Moon Flower. I'm so flattered right now. Haha. I just didn't expect someone would take time reading my poem. Anyway, thanks, again. Have read some of your beautiful poems, too.
Date: 6/17/2016 10:29:00 PM
Ezekiel, welcome aboard. Nice to see your first post. Skat
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