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I dream we'll meet across the bay You've blazed a garland's trail for me Glazed stones, of lilies, pave the way On mirrored glass, I'll sail the sea
_____________________________________________ Inspired by Visual # 1 Nette's Contest:Memento of Waters 3//9/15 By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/28/2015 10:28:00 PM
haha, I am thinking to myself, had this been my contest, you would probably have placed first. Oh my. congrats to you.
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Date: 3/27/2015 2:29:00 PM
Very beautiful descriptive write, Carrie, congratulations on your win a 7
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:45:00 PM
Ahh!! Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 3/27/2015 9:56:00 AM
So romantic, Carrie. Superb imagery. Congratulations! Kim :)
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Date: 3/27/2015 12:08:00 AM
Back with my congrats, Carrie!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:48:00 PM
I like this lots! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:46:00 PM
I love the way interpreted this visual, Carrie! Lovely, romantic words that sail along so beautifully! I chose this same visual, but didn't make the list. Congratulations and hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/26/2015 5:42:00 PM
so charming Carrie superb pen 7 hugs
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:36:00 PM
congratulations Carrie very nice write and well deserved win.
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:33:00 PM
a creative take on the theme--- dream-like message wonderfully depicted... thank you for being part of my contest, carrie... rounds of applause on your fine win.. huggs
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Date: 3/26/2015 3:49:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:25:00 PM
Beautiful flow of imagery and words...a sure winner! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/10/2015 12:31:00 PM
It flows like the currents of life with a realistic crispness. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/9/2015 3:12:00 PM
simply stunning Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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