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A Gal Named Trudy

There once was a gal named Trudy, who was extremely snooty. Walking head up, nose in air, she didn't have a care, till she tripped and fell on her booty. 9/15/16

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Jean Murray

Date: 9/19/2016 9:01:00 AM

Rudy Trudy's cheeks were ruby. Well done.

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:24:00 AM

Ha ha! Thanks for commenting, Jean!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/16/2016 10:20:00 AM

Ouch! But sometimes the only way to humble us. Love it!

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2016 10:14:00 PM

This made me burst into laughter Kim...a perfect Limerick. Loved It! I have to fave it for when I need a good laugh! ; ) 7

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. So glad you liked it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2016 9:19:00 PM

GREAT rhyme and limerick beat, Kim. I love seeing a poem of yours brand new!

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Such a sweet thing to say.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/15/2016 5:33:00 PM

HA HA! Serves her right, I guess. Being snooty doesn't pay. Good one, Kim. Hugs

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:21:00 AM

Thanks, Eileen!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/15/2016 5:30:00 PM

ha! very cute, kim! she got what she deserved...

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:21:00 AM

Thanks, Ilene!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2016 11:34:00 AM

ha ha ha great fun here Kim but not for Trudy of course:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:20:00 AM

Thanks, Jan!