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A Futuristic Christmas

It's hard to believe that another five years have passed When one looks around it's quite amazing for one to see How did we survive such when we were to be our last Where we once lived, we still live among the trees Even our skies are different from those few years before But it's our spirits that meld together keeping us as we From this Christmas day we must learn, fuse all, implore Unite as human beings, allow the Universe to see 28/11/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/23/2017 8:41:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 12/29/2015 10:00:00 AM
Simply the cream of the crop! Congratulations!!! :)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thank you kindly ~~ James :)
Date: 12/28/2015 11:17:00 PM
WONDERFUL WIN....LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 1:42:00 PM
Thank you kindly PD ~~ James :)
Date: 12/28/2015 10:23:00 PM
A very nice win. SKAT
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 1:41:00 PM
Thank you SKAT ~~ James :)
Date: 12/28/2015 2:11:00 AM
A good message on keeping. The spirit of Christmas. Congratulations on your winning poem. SuZ
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 1:09:00 PM
Thank you kindly Suzanne ~~ James ~~ :) :)
Date: 12/28/2015 1:43:00 AM
Great take on the theme and a wonderful poetry James.. congrats on top place win!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma ~~ James ~~ :)
Date: 12/27/2015 8:50:00 PM
awesome win there, James. BIG congrats to you!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:48:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea, always appreciate your comments ~~ hugs ~~ James :) :)
Date: 12/27/2015 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, James!!!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thank you kindly Eve ~~ hugs ~~ James :) :)
Date: 12/27/2015 7:24:00 PM
Nicely said, James. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:35:00 PM
Thank you kindly Sandra, back at you also ~~ James :) :)
Date: 12/27/2015 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations, fellow topster, and all the best to you both for the New year. Regards, Viv
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:24:00 PM
Many thanks Viv, much appreciated. Wishing you a Happy and Healthy 2016 ~~ James :)
Date: 12/27/2015 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the your win.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/28/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thank you kindly Susan ~~ James ~~ :)
Date: 12/27/2015 1:59:00 PM
James, many congrats on your win, as Jan has said below! Very creative and I adored it! -luloo *smiles* *congrats*
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James Fraser
Date: 12/28/2015 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura, very much appreciated ~~ James :)
Date: 12/27/2015 1:35:00 PM
Many congrats on your win James - my entry is too late for the contest will probably post it tomorrow:-) 2016 will be so so special for you and Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/28/2015 11:22:00 AM
Thank you kindly Jan, for I'm smiling that this poem has been liked as it has been ~~ hugs ~~ James xx
Date: 12/1/2015 5:35:00 PM
huge one, over the years the celebration of Christmas has been constantly changing what I appreciate here in the Philippines stilll some traditions are maintained and I believe this is too all over the world but sad to see the meaning of Christmas has been taken for granted by some... Soon James we will be celebrating lots of Christmas together,,~Olive Eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2015 11:24:00 AM
Spending Christmas with you brightens my heart like a fully lit tree. It'll soon be 2016, and what a Christmas that's going to be ~ hugs little one ~ // your Huge James ;-) xx ~~ xx

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