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A Fun Poem

As we look forward to a (Revolution) in living and loving the retired life. I was hoping my wife, who is teaching me how to speak toddler. Would lead me to a (Spontaneous) (Fixation), to (Patronize) our two year old granddaughter, and (Navigate) the (Portal) of some (Tangible)(Intrigue). And provide the older grand kids with some exciting games and entertainment.

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Robert Kinard

Date: 2/13/2020 9:06:00 AM

Thank you, and yes I am proud grandpa but I wrote this poem to to enter a contest where you had to use certain words. I am waiting to hear how did and if won.

Miranda Hawley

Date: 2/12/2020 12:09:00 PM

You did a good job of capturing that story, although I would fairly call that a story more a poem, less. Good job on the details and the image of what happened.

Robert Kinard
Date: 2/13/2020 9:07:00 AM

Thank you, and yes I am a proud grandpa but I wrote this poem to enter a contest. I’m waiting to see how I did and if I won.

Miranda Hawley

Date: 2/12/2020 12:04:00 PM

Sounds like you are a proud grandpa.