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A Friend's Deep Concern

Carolyn is one of my best friends, and we comfort each other with encouraging words, and it seems I do worry more than she... oh, should we meet death before it strikes, or hope to see more lovely, sunny days? How could we reach the end and simply face sorrow when pain is an unheard cry? No, we should cheer ourselves up and just trust that we'll defeat the fear of that dark day... hoping a friend's deep concern isn't the worst.

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Date: 9/25/2011 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Dizain" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:45:00 PM
So happy to see your words touched Dr. Ram's heart as well, Andrew. Congratulations, my friend! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2011 2:02:00 PM
Andrew, Your "A FRIEND'S DEEP CONCERN' is a touching work. I enjoyed it's message. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2011 10:58:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on an exiting win with this dynamic poetry my friend...luv...
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:28:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in my contest, Andrew
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:00:00 PM
Dear Andrew, are you ill as well? I didn't know. Very sorry to hear this, but I know your faith is strong like mine. I don't fear death, but see it as a passage to eternal life. This is a lovely poem, my friend, and I'm sorry I didn't see it earlier. I would love to meet you and give you a hug. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:35:00 PM
lovely piece
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