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A Friend In Doubt

A Friend in Doubt WLM Wildncrazy555 July 2, 2011 Thought I had a true friend He would be there till the end In the end I found out What he was all about Making me the shrew And giving me the screw Though the years we were there All we did was help and share You show concern But then you learn His name is Jimmy and so full of bull He treats most as a fool Once he is alone It will finally lost last be shown Just keep on to thyself lying Because soon you will be dying Things will be better in the end Cause life will be begin again But now a lost friend to me So my life is finally free

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Date: 7/29/2011 11:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Bill. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 7/26/2011 12:50:00 PM
Wow, yup being betrayed by a friend can indeed hurt-- definitely felt that in this write, William-- and yup some people can indeed chain you as well- I am happy for you that you were freed-- Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/26/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Michael's "Ode to a Friend" contest William. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:49:00 PM
Congrats William on your top ten victory with this excellent poetry for the contest ode to a friend luv..enjoy..
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:26:00 PM
I really felt your expressions of betrayal, and relief at being freed from this 'friendship' congrats on your win and thanks for entering my first ever win~Michael
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Michael Hornschuch
Date: 7/25/2011 10:27:00 PM
i meant to say 'thanks for entering my first ever CONTEST....
Date: 7/25/2011 10:19:00 PM
Sounds like you were deeply hurt. Sorry for your pain, however congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:38:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael,William
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today William. Love, Carol
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