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A Fragile Thing A mighty thing she is, this earth of ours, beneath her guiding moon and map of stars, held close and ruled by our life-giving sun. Tho forming still, with moving plates and scars, her place in the vast cosmos, she has won. And yet our earth is quite a fragile thing that dangles on the sun's magnetic ring much like an antique ball on Christmas tree, where sudden movement could a fracture bring. Which fault line changes our earth's history? Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Premiere Contest: The Fault Line Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Judged: 12/09/2016

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Date: 12/9/2016 8:02:00 PM
This so beautiful, Sandra, I don't think many people see our mother earth as fragile, but she truly is.. congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2016 4:26:00 PM
Great write Sandra. Congratulations on your high placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/9/2016 12:47:00 PM
Wise and playful, you give us a great read here, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Doug. Sandra
Date: 12/9/2016 12:40:00 PM
Interesting slant on fault line! Congrats! :-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark. Sandra
Date: 12/9/2016 12:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Rick! Sandra
Date: 12/9/2016 12:28:00 PM
Very well done Sandra! Congratulations.:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/28/2016 4:35:00 AM
A beautiful description of how fragile our Earth really is. I am sure to see this gem high on the winner's list Sandra! : ) 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. I appreciate your supportive comments and wonderful rating! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/21/2016 11:59:00 PM
Sandra, this is wonderful for the contest, you nailed the theme perfectly, best of luck but quite sure you have a winner !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/21/2016 10:43:00 AM
So well written and what a wonderful analogy of a Christmas ball. Love the poem Mrs Sandra. Good luck!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/11/2016 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel. Sandra

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