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A Fragile Beauty

A fragile beauty, fluttering with ease Floats upon a summer breeze With delicate wings of tangerine Its flight is lovely and serene It flutters into fields of gold As the summer day unfolds A flower opens to entreat To entice with nectar sweet Upon this flower it then alights And sips the nectar with delight ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/29/2017 8:56:00 AM
This is beautiful indeed, Joseph, just like the butterfly it talks about:) my hearty congratulations:)
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Date: 4/29/2017 8:01:00 AM
Lovely poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your first place win. Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2017 8:40:00 PM
Love seeing this one again, Joseph. Congrats for a big win!
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Date: 4/28/2017 7:28:00 PM
A lovely one! Congrats!
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Date: 4/28/2017 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph, well done...
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Date: 4/28/2017 10:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Joseph.
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Date: 9/1/2016 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this worthy podium finish, Joseph. A merited win for these lovely smooth flowing couplets most fitting a butterfly. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:45:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely write ~
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Date: 8/30/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Constance
Date: 8/29/2016 12:28:00 PM
Hi Joseph, You penned such a lovely couplet. Nice flow and content. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:10:00 PM
Great poem Joseph x
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Date: 8/23/2016 8:08:00 AM
Oh I love butterflies Jospeh and this is a very beautiful poem with delightful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2016 2:48:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/23/2016 1:29:00 AM
this is fantastic. I did couplets too. Just not posted yet.
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Date: 8/22/2016 8:36:00 PM
nicely written Joseph
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