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oh love,love me do with sweet poems,old and new or odes that ring true my darling,don't fret, dearest heart my number one; see how I've begun with end rhyme we'll have fun,or maybe sonnet or tercet on no,not flowery words too obscure and seldom heard, such poetry's no better than prose by letter Brian Strand

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Date: 6/13/2011 7:45:00 PM
Brian, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your excellent win in this contest of Linda's..gautami
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Date: 6/9/2011 2:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this very creative work..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:17:00 AM
Many congratulations on both your wins, Brian : )
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of linda, brian
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:26:00 PM
Congrats~ love your simple twists with great impact!!!!!SMILES!!!~God bless...^Rick
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:07:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your fourth place win in my contest luv..
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Date: 5/24/2011 2:51:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem Brian. I would like to thank you for all the contests you've taken your time to set up and judge for us. Good as well as an enjoyable learning experience for me in the contest itself and reading the ones chosen as good, better and best. Thanks again- Robert
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:45:00 PM
LOL, great piece, Brian. Thanks - your contest was great fun. I've loved footles ever since I read a batch of Andrea's
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:22:00 AM
a romantic touch of days gone by Brian when gentlemen courted ladies with such delicacy .. beautiful ... thankxx for a great two syllable two words footle contest.. luv this challenge always.. appreciate my 4th place for "Free and Easy" and am proud to say words ring true in my piece .. am debt free praise the Lord.. for many years now.. good luck in your new contest which will check out today .. appreciate the win ..it is a great birthday gift..for me.luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:47:00 PM
Creative and inspiring write. I remembered Mark twain that too many adjectives or flowery language kill the meaning, Brian
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:25:00 PM
a very refreshing and creative piece of Tanka, enjoyed reading this one.
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