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A Forgotten Skeleton

the dream painted itself sad ashen grey a parched desert where rain never falls this dark metaphor in her barren heart loneliness whispering of love yet to call bones of long lost hope on the ground amid sands of uncountable empty years she picked up the skull bleached white all that remained of an old mossy steer wondering if that would be her destiny to wander until life's hourglass ran dry becoming a forgotten, lost skeleton eroded by day and ignored by night's sky

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Date: 1/18/2022 8:07:00 PM
This is haunting and so very sad. A beautifully penned masterpiece!
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John Gilman
Date: 1/19/2022 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm very, very pleased that you liked it!
Date: 1/2/2022 10:38:00 PM
it's thrilling loneliness
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John Gilman
Date: 1/3/2022 12:36:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it!
Date: 1/2/2022 12:44:00 PM
Hello John Gilman, she is lonely in the dessert.No wonder she is depressed. Peoplethat go to the dessert and get lost i sense are not found alive. No wonder she is depressed. Enjoy your day my friend. D. De. B.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/3/2022 11:06:00 AM
Hello John, oh dreaming of the dessert. Yes it would be a symbol of loneliness. Yes I do like it. Enjoy your day my friend.
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John Gilman
Date: 1/3/2022 12:35:00 AM
She's only dreaming about the desert, my friend! It's symbolic for loneliness. But, I'm pleased that you liked it!

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