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A Forever Dream Sleeps Beauty

I went to the little islands today under the evergreen fir tree, magic Sang, sitting on a large rock enchanting over looks the lake love, will you sweet babe Deny me as just one guest following dreams listening to songbirds in sweet song someone who shares this one view I lay back A clear blue sky with fluffy ivory white bleached clouds thoughts stirring tunes playing Dreaming inside ocean waves thoughts drifting Ten by ten a fish jumps up and plops rippling rings forever circle hope deeply thoughts sailing always my strength Dancing whispers inside a breeze warm silently loving best memories Those in my life dream angel were made within this one spot I kiss honey Golden leaves now scattered on the soil beauty I will never forget you 10 syllable counts by 10 equals one in a hundred 9 syllable counts by 9 always and forever holds a dream on that cloud

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Date: 11/17/2014 8:49:00 PM
Such a lovely canvas of beauty and colors you've delivered us here Liam, my dear friend. Your island is a delightful ladscape of textures, colors, and sounds, great memories I hope for you.Enjoyed it! A 7 for you! love and hugs! :)xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/18/2014 8:56:00 AM
i paint what my heart dreams through my eyes yes i loved it here as a boy playing treasure island we claimed it as ours funny enough when young it holds the most special memory of love wonderful comment dear friend got me spilling the beans on this one lol
Date: 11/17/2014 2:36:00 PM
Sounds like a fabulous island...cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/17/2014 2:56:00 PM
it is that tim we spent many's a day camping with friends in our youth here so it is a very special place pal thank you kindly wonderful comment
Date: 11/17/2014 12:59:00 AM
- A truly beautiful poem (as always) Liam - I wish you a nice Monday .... new week ... new poem .... and new smile :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/17/2014 4:37:00 AM
you also have a beautiful monday anne lise walking you into a fresh new week smiling wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/16/2014 10:44:00 PM
So lovely, Liam! And wonderful imagery...you really took me to that island. :)) love & blessings, Rhonda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/17/2014 4:35:00 AM
smiling rhonda paradise lost in the deep thank you kindly wonderful comment sending you an auld irish blessing dear friend
Date: 11/16/2014 9:32:00 PM
Lovely Liam...sweet music.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/17/2014 4:31:00 AM
thank you deeply eileen heartfelt wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/16/2014 8:05:00 PM
all full with vibrant energy! I like this one Liam. A blessed day for you.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/17/2014 4:26:00 AM
thank you ever so kindly katrina you also have a blessed beautiful day

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