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A Fool's Valentine

Tender tear drops drip like dreams from pain ted petals, as slowly, I pick my path through the st inging nettles of every pain filled word you say. You pus h me away with idle chattel, as in my heart I fight this loosing battle. Can't you see I'm so lonely without you. I would gladly be there to hold your hand through life's insipid sorrow if you would but let me. I would fill you with joy and make you smile each day with fragrant lavender roses. But I know you don't feel the same. Your indifference hurts. Am I so difficult to love? I would joyfully give you my world if you let me.
01/29/17

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Date: 3/7/2017 4:58:00 PM
Congrats, I don't know what you got but this was a very well deserved win!
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James Inman
Date: 3/15/2017 10:15:00 AM
Sorry I missed your comment Andrea, thank you.
Date: 3/6/2017 2:18:00 AM
James, this is incredible, this is absolutely awesome.... For me this is a winner, 7 and fav... Congratulations :)
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James Inman
Date: 3/6/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Darren.
Date: 3/4/2017 3:29:00 PM
fabulous image of a broken heart - many congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:56:00 PM
Hi Jan, thanks for your lovely words.
Date: 3/4/2017 10:27:00 AM
This is great James, you are so creative, I just love the image of the broken heart, really well done, congrats on a fine win!
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment and your always welcome visit John.
Date: 3/4/2017 5:31:00 AM
The bold letters let me stop and read again. Bold poem. Slight typo in the word fill? But/and I like tis poem. Congratulations, Kai
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Kai.
Date: 3/4/2017 1:25:00 AM
I too was looking for a hidden meaning with the bold letters. Congrats on taking second place.
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:49:00 PM
I wish I had thought of it when I wrote this. Thanks Rob.
Date: 3/3/2017 9:54:00 PM
Great creative shape poem, James! Congrats on your win :)
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you for the kindness Laura.
Date: 3/3/2017 4:15:00 PM
Wow- congrats on your win with this great shape poem!
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment Agnes.
Date: 3/3/2017 3:23:00 PM
Perfect :) congratulations on your win ~* Hugs
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James Inman
Date: 3/4/2017 3:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve.
Date: 2/5/2017 4:54:00 AM
This is Fantastic and quite hard work input for the shape.Great! It seems the heart is speaking here. GL:)
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James Inman
Date: 2/5/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Sunita.
Date: 2/3/2017 6:47:00 PM
So pretty. But gosh, I am making myself crazy trying to figure out if the bold letters spell out a secret message and if they do, I can't find what it is. Very well done on the shape and the message of it.
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2017 11:52:00 PM
Sorry Andrea, no hidden message. The bold and the italics were meant to highlight the crack in the broken heart. Thanks for the nice comment.

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