A flower in armour

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A shy flower tries to bloom under the heavy showers, the cold, frost and the season. It isn't her time to be shown, but she fights to have her chance. On a green bush she displays her beauty against the unpredictable, with her tenacity. A hard pink flower survives day after day fighting with the elements trying to defeat her. A beautiful flower in armour has a focus in her life, She blooms when she likes, not for the others' surprise.

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Bill Baker

Date: 12/5/2023 5:22:00 PM

As does a fine lady. Maria. Beautiful picture of the frost laden rose, and excellent imagery in this poem. A FAV for my list! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/5/2023 5:36:00 PM

Hey my Texan poet friend.I really appreciate all your kind words that mean a lot to me. Thanks for the fav too. I'm glad you passed by my little corner. Hugs for you and your lovely heart Saraxxx

Lynn D.

Date: 12/5/2023 4:06:00 AM

Beautifully written! Intelligent!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/5/2023 6:08:00 AM

Hello Lynn. Thank you so much for stopping by and your comment. Have a nice day!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 4:39:00 PM

so delicate yet powerful are your words. I see you as a pink flower who survives a world that tries to defeat her...blooming when and how you like. I loved the imagery and message in your poem. Have to fave it for sure...have a splendid evening, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/4/2023 12:53:00 AM

Hello Sara. Thank you very much for your nice comment and the fav. Im happy you enjoyed. Blessingsxxxx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/3/2023 2:18:00 PM

I get it... in some way an armor can protect the flower until the flower is ready to bloom. Good Job, Ed

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/3/2023 2:44:00 PM

Hey Ed, good job. Nice you pass by and read it . What a nice surprise. The flower in her armour means, she feels ready to fight against the whole world, because she was born with the armour to fight. Thank you for your lovely comment