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A Flower

A lonely flower Quiet and sad Swaying to the melancholy song of the wind No other flower for company Only tall grass hiding her from the outside world One day brought a wandering bee Saw the flower And lost his heart To her slender beauty He tenderly sat on her soft petals Caressing her center with his mouth Overjoyed on being so close To this delicate being She—her emotions were in turmoil It felt like heaven When he caressed her He danced from one petal to another And she swayed in pleasure The wind supplied the music The sun came out to give warmth The bee tenderly opened The flower center In he went and drank the sweet nectar Which seemed to go on and on Satisfied he came out Saw the flower was pale Slowly one by one Her petals dropped She bowed her slender head and died There was a soft smile on her face The satisfied smile Of a full and happy life He sadly looked on in silence Swaying slowly with the melancholy wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2011 12:50:00 AM
A beautiful story weaved witin your poetry here - a deserved win, congratulations!
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tale, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:53:00 PM
What a creative love story between the bee and the flower he so admired. I like the way you told this story in verse, Tahera. Excellent work! Congratulations on your placement in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine winin the contest, Tahera
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:36:00 PM
A sweet storty and though a narrative still written in true poetic form. Very nice. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:06:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your win in the Story Time contest.. so happy once again to see u enter and win ... enjoy sweet success for a wonderful piece of poetry my friend.. with luv...
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your 8th Place win in my Story Time contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 9:09:00 AM
Tahera, I just love the metaphors used in this one, thoroughly enjoyed this afternoon, love Wilma
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Date: 9/12/2010 7:42:00 AM
Very sweet and wonderful write Tahera..hope u enter it in Carol's new contest ..its awesome and a sure winner luv.. enjoyed this happy Sunday... please let me know when u receive your prize gift in the mail luv..thankxxx...
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Date: 9/12/2010 5:15:00 AM
A poem displaying passions and its nice feelings, Tahera with fina metaphor
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